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Post by Hopemoon on Oct 8, 2006 9:09:22 GMT -5
Name Hopestar
Clan Riverclan
Age 20 moons
Gender She-cat
Peltage She has a gray/blue cote with river blue eyes
Personality She is nice.She loves to play with the kits and one some cat dies she get very emotional.She's caring.Even though she is a leader she learned to be a medicine cat because she does not like to see a cat hurt.She is fast.In a blink of an eye she can have a mouse in her mouth.
History She was the last leader's daughter.When she was born StarClan said that she was the one who will save the clan. When she was a warrior she saved the clan from a flood.
IC Hopestar ran outside after a little bit of hunting she came back with 6 mice!
"Well I guess that's good." she meowed.
"YOU GUESS??? THAT'S AMAZING!!" yelled a small kit near her.
"Calm down little kit. When you're ready, I'll teach you to do this."
"Cool!!!!"
"Now go back to the nursery." Hopestar meowed calmly.
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Post by *Seasle on Oct 8, 2006 9:41:38 GMT -5
Her name cannot be Riverstar if she's the leader of RiverClan. You'll have to change it. Can you please use proper grammer? If it's hard for you, you can use spell check. And, I'm going to change this a bit, so it looks better.
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Post by Hopemoon on Oct 8, 2006 9:42:39 GMT -5
Okay.
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Post by Hopemoon on Oct 8, 2006 9:43:19 GMT -5
Her name be Hopestar now.Is that okay??
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Post by *Seasle on Oct 8, 2006 9:45:34 GMT -5
Sure. She's not my charrie, is she?
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Post by *Seasle on Oct 8, 2006 9:46:30 GMT -5
Oh, and I'm also going to fix the grammer errers. You should use this as an example.
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Post by Hopemoon on Oct 8, 2006 9:47:31 GMT -5
How do I put her name in the leader space??
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Post by *Seasle on Oct 8, 2006 9:53:23 GMT -5
I'll do that, but if you really want to know, click on admin at the top of the site, and then click on headers and footers. Go to main headers and footers.
Also, I think you should put in more details about Hopestar's personality.
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Post by Hopemoon on Oct 8, 2006 9:56:25 GMT -5
Okay but I don't know what to put.
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Post by *Seasle on Oct 8, 2006 10:01:19 GMT -5
Just put down some quirks. Maybe she's really curious, and that gets her into trouble. Or maybe she's responsible, and wise.
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Post by Hopemoon on Oct 8, 2006 10:04:30 GMT -5
Its okay I got it. if I have any spelling problems you may fix them.
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Post by *Seasle on Oct 8, 2006 10:08:47 GMT -5
Much better. Accepted!
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Post by *Seasle on Oct 8, 2006 10:24:01 GMT -5
seperates
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